Hi blogger
Today I am going to tell you how to make a great blog comment.In order to make a good blog comment you have to have a greeting, followed by a positive sentence, a thoughtful comment,a helpful sentence and lastly a question. Watch my video to see how to make a great blog comment. Bye from Zara
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Zara,
ReplyDeleteOne of the first things I liked in your presentations was the music in the background. It wasn't to loud but subtle enough so well done on the choice here otherwise it would have been difficult to hear your voice over. One of the other things that I enjoyed was at the start you said ' start with a greeting like ki ora or bonjour...' This is a great way of recognising other cultures and does engage the listener. Some feedforward for next time could be to think about pictures and images for each set of text that relate more to the point you are trying to make. Well done Zara.
Mr Brown